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Composition Practice 4

Writing multiple sentences:

There are several things that cats and I have in common; love for independence, short attention span, and affection for towels and soft fabrics. For starters, cats are known to be quite different from dogs. While dogs are a gregarious animal, cats love to act alone and don't usually need a group or pack to live in. Likewise, I'm the person who can spend her time alone as long as it gets. Also, I don't feel comfortable to be in a group or close-knit community. I do miss people, but online communication will basically suffice. Second, it is generally believed that cats are easily distracted because their attention span is short and limited. So is mine. To be more precise, I cannot stay focused on something I'm not very much into such as boring lectures or routine paperwork and house chores Finally, I have a feeling that I love towels and soft fabrics as much as cats do. I was a child who loves sleeping wrapped with her favorite blankets and hates them to be washed. So, I feel some kind of sympathy toward Linus from Peanuts who always holds his favorite security blanket.


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Love for independence, short attention span, and affection for towels and soft fabrics - these are the things that cats and I have in common. For starters, cats are known to be quite different from dogs. While dogs are a gregarious animal, cats love to act alone and don't usually need a group or pack to live in. Some people, likewise, like to act like cats. In fact, I'm a person who can spend her time alone as long as it gets. I don't feel comfortable to be in a group or close-knit community. I, however, do miss people at times. On such occasions, online communication will suffice. As for the attention span, it is generally believed that cats are easily distracted due to their short attention span. This is where I come in. To be more precise, I cannot stay focused on something I'm not very much into, such as boring lectures or routine paperwork and house chores. Regarding the soft fabrics, I have a feeling that I also love these things as much as cats do. I was a child who loved sleeping wrapped with her favorite blankets and hated them to be washed. So, I, therefore, feel some kind of sympathy toward Linus from Peanuts, who always holds his favorite security blanket.
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